just from the sacle shot i can tell your scale category is very off. i almost certain hes 40mm scale the problem arises in his pose his head is down and his legs are in a squat if he was non dynamic he would be around 40mm especially since he looks like a giant compared to a space marine (who is 32 mm BTW)
anyway ... your anatomy looks spot on (his arms are a bit long maybe) and you have a good grasp of drapery (much better on both counts then me) im not really liking the bass wire hair but i guess that was a time call on your part. also why isnt his sword hilt got any sculpting? its large enough to warrant it.
i hope we can see more of your work :)
Thanks for the nice comments. The guitar strings as hair was totally intended. I wanted to go for Slash using these strings as hair and then I decided to give him a twist and made him a Mariachi-warrior-thing :-)
You're right on the sword hilt, maybe I'll add something later on.
On the scale I totally disagree with you though. The contest rules say "The 'scale' will be 28mm, including it's common variations and deviations. I.e. 28-32mm, heroic or realistic scale."
So it's 28 to 32mm scale. I took another comparison picture next to an Eden range figure. The Eden figure is 32mm to the eyes and my mini seems very well on scale with that. But I'll let you see for yourself: